A Glimpse into Hostel Life & After

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This is a wonderful and evocative piece about your college experience in 1977–81

It really captures the excitement, challenges, and personal growth you experienced during that time. Here are some of the things I found particularly strong:

  • Vivid Descriptions: You paint a clear picture of your journey, from the initial pride of securing admission to the immersive details of campus life. Phrases like “rites of passage” and “boundless potential” add depth and meaning.
  • Variety of Activities: The details about the numerous sports and games you participated in showcase your active and well-rounded college life. It goes beyond academics and demonstrates your passion for physical activity.
  • Focus on Personal Growth: The story goes beyond just listing achievements. You highlight how challenges made you stronger and how you embraced all aspects of college life for personal development.
  • Reflective Tone: Concluding with a message about unleashing potential through hard work and zest for life leaves a lasting impression. It connects your experience to a broader theme of personal growth.
  • Habits still with me: I used to have good habits till now even after retirement. Good eating, physical excercises paved the way for very successful life.

I am proud to live my entire life full of motivation & hardwork.

Overall, this is a well-written piece that captures the essence of a transformative college experience. It’s inspiring and reminds us of the importance of embracing challenges and opportunities during that period of life.

I played so many games & stamina was on top. We used to care for our body.

Football

Volleyball

Kabadi

Hockey

Cricket,

Badminton

Table tennis

Lawn tennis

Basketball

Long jump

High jump

Carrom board

Tug of war

Polevault

Cycling

Weightlifting

Running 10 km cross country races & small races like 400, 800,1500 & 5000meters

1. Emphasis on Healthy Habits:

  • “My commitment to a healthy lifestyle, staying clear of smoking, tobacco, and alcohol, positively impacted not just me but also my family.”

2. Highlighting Positive Influence:

  • “Choosing a smoke-free and sober path set a strong example for my children and family, encouraging healthy habits for generations to come.”

3. Focus on Long-Term Benefits:

  • “The decision to avoid smoking, tobacco, and alcohol early on has had a lasting positive influence on my health and well-being, which has benefited my entire family.”

4. Expressing Personal Choice:

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